ENCOUNTER
Charlene
I flipped the page of the book,
and stifled a yawn. I had slept for barely two hours the previous night,
because my sister, who lives across the world, was having a difficult time at
work and wanted to talk. You do not say no to siblings. We cried a little, and
sang a few of our favourite songs from our childhood. When we said our
goodbyes, it was 6:00 AM.
I stretched my feet, tapping my
ankles against the wooden floorboard, and realizing that my toenails were
repulsively long and dirty, curled them to hide the grotesque sight. I needed a
pedicure. My apartment was quiet now that my roommate had left for work. I had
a day off, and wanted to spend it doing nothing. It is not everyday you get to
do that. So far, the plan was not unfolding as I had hoped for. All I wanted
was to curl up inside my blanket and slip into dreams, and the knowledge that
this would ruin my biological clock, the forbidden quality, made my eyes droop
lower. Shaking my head, I decided to go for a walk. The Fall Season was
probably my favourite, with its light breeze and comforting presence.
I eased into a thin woollen
sweater and zipped up my sneakers. I had money left over, in my jeans pocket,
from my last rendezvous, so I didn’t take my purse. The lift ride downstairs to
the building lobby was uneventful, except for an unfortunate incident of my
hair getting stuck in the doors of the lift because I stood too close to them.
I winked at the doorman, a sixty-year-old man, and pushed open the doors,
stepping onto the curb. For a moment, I just stood there, taking in the noise
of the traffic, the bustling of feet of pedestrians and the barking of pet dogs
out for their daily walk. It had drizzled the previous night, and the road was
still sticky with water and dust. It reminded me of home, almost. I started
walking towards a park six blocks away. It had a swing set for adults, and had
become a frequent haunt for me. If my family knew that I stepped out of the
flat nowadays for non-inevitable reasons, they would have me called back home.
Lately, there had been an increase of murders in the city, and the newspapers
stated that the only thing common between them was that the victims were all
young women. My mother had a panic attack the day she read that.
I had barely walked for five
hundred metres when I felt my stomach grumble. I glanced at my watch and saw
that it was well past 12, and given that I was someone who had at least six
meals a day, I was overdue. I glanced around and saw a SUBWAY outlet. I was not
particularly fond of their sandwiches, or of the social interaction required to
place one’s order, but their cookies were delicious. I waited for the signal to
turn red, before crossing the street and pushing open the door to the
restaurant.
Lewis
“Order for Ms. Tatiana is ready.
A six-inch sub, with capsicum, cucumbers, onions, olives and barbeque sauce. No
cheese. Whole-wheat bread, untoasted,” I said, looking around for the customer.
Personally, I felt nauseous while making it, but as a SUBWAY worker, you learn
to control your face muscles from scrunching up in disgust. She finally came to
the counter, tapping her long nails impatiently against it. As if I
was the one doing the delay. “Here you go, Ma’am. Enjoy your meal.” She
almost grabbed the tray out of my hand and went to sit down on a corner table.
Fortunately for her, I never went for older women.
I turned around to check up on
the chocolate chip cookies baking, and heard the bell ring, as it did every
time someone entered or exited the restaurant. Owing to a reflex action, I turned
around to see and saw a girl, about my age, walk in. I stared at her a little
longer than I should have, and she swiveled her head, looking right at me. I
knew showing any form of nervousness would seem suspicious, so I called on to
my friendly server tone, “Good Afternoon, Ma’am. May I take your
order?” I move over to the computer, and tap on the screen to initiate a new
bill. I could always type without looking, so I pretended to stare at the
screen, but focussed on her. “To go. Italian Herbs and Cheese Bread, toasted,
with cheese. Six inches.” She had an accent, so she wasn’t from around here.
Curly hair, pitch black, soft, or perhaps not. I wanted to touch them. Was she
the sweet but wild kind? Nodding, I waited for her to continue, “Fried chicken
popcorn, olives, onions, cabbage… No, no cabbage…” She had a small mole on her
left cheek, and a scar on her right hand. She was fiddling with her ring, in
the middle finger. Nervous and as it turned out, unmarried. “For sauces, only
ranch.” I was about to proceed with her order when she looked at me, her lips
pouted slightly, her eyes radiating embarrassment. What kind? I couldn’t read
it. “Um, sorry. Just one addition. Four double chocolate chip cookies.” Ding.
“That was the cookies,” I replied, and she let out a small laugh. It was sweet,
genuine. “That will be twelve dollars. Cash or card?” “Cash,” she fished into
her jeans pocket and her sweater slipped from her shoulder, revealing a small
tattoo. Classy. “There you go.” I counted the money, and before she turned to
sit in a booth, “What’s the name?” “Oh, it is Charlene.” I had never
encountered a Charlene before; this would be interesting. I still did not know
what kind. I printed the receipt out and hung it over the Cooking Station. I
whipped out my phone, and typed out: Charlene, 25-ish, single, international,
level: unknown.
As I warmed up the bread and
fried the popcorn, I overheard a conversation Charlene was having. As the call
progressed, I felt myself tense, delirious with the desire I often felt right
before completion. I gripped the knife I had used to slice the bread open
tightly, resisting the urge to jump across at her. I had become fairly good at
controlling myself in public places, but once in a while, the mysterious ones
got to me. I counted to ten and relished the idea of planning the task out, for
Charlene, tonight. The assembling went fairly quickly, and I slowly wrapped her
sub and packed the cookies, observing her movements. She was left-handed. Lived
somewhere close-by, because there was moisture at the bottom of her sneakers,
and it had only rained in this area of the city. “Order for Ms. Charlene.” Her
name rolled out, smoothly. Delicious. She walked over and placed her phone on
the counter to pick up the packet and receipt. She was texting Roomie.
So, she did not live alone. Probably had a flat-mate, so lived in an apartment
complex.
She stuffed her phone into her
pocket and as she turned around to leave, she smiled at me, “Thank you so much!
Have a great day.” For a moment, I was taken aback. I was hoping she would be
rude, inconsiderate, cold and flipping her hair away. I was waiting for her to
reveal her snobbish side, most of them had one. She didn’t. “You too! Have a
great meal.”
A great writer in making! 💕
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteOh my God!! Very creative, loved how you focused on every detail.
ReplyDeletePS. Hope you write more of it!
Thank you so much! :).
DeleteThis was the first time I tried something like this, and I really enjoyed writing it. So, I am looking forward to writing in this manner, in the future. :))
Very well written 👍 keep going
ReplyDeleteIntriguing... Poor Lewis.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeletePersonally, I'd say poor Charlene, because her life is in potential danger. But, what you've mentioned is an interesting outlook towards the story.